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Journal 19

Journal 19

Q • What kinds of feedback did you receive? • Which comments or suggestions do you think you might adopt as you complete and/or revise your essay? Why? • Which comments or suggestions do you think you won’t adopt? Why not? • Did you observe anything in your peers’ writing that gave you ideas for your own activity analysis? If so, what? How might you adopt that strategy, idea, structure, etc.?

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I have received very encouraging and constructive feedbacks. Actually, these feedbacks will definitely be incorporated in the final draft of this project. I have gone through the same process in project 1 and 2 and I have incorporated the feedbacks. I had modified some parts of my draft based on these feedbacks as well. I have received positive results after that. For the third project Ii am definitively going to repeat this process. I would like to thank all for the valuable feedbacks.